Apr 29, 2013

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Faiz Post : I am Not Killer but a Superhero

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In a dark creepy night there was a man named JAMES. He was a farmer, but people say his a killer because people saw a picture of him killing a granny in a forest.






But a midnight he went out to the "zombie street" and give people a notes that says "I am no a killer". After he finished doing that, he ran as fast as he could to his house. His House was fall of spider webs.

In the morning, people were reading the notes and try to figured how he look like. And than people were saying to the police like this "Could you please find him and the police said," OK."And 500 police were looking for him.

And there came a man with a scary face with a gun on his pocket. And a sound of a gun shot came and say, "James is not the killer but I am, he started to kill one by one of a person."

After that James went up to the sky and people started to say,"Who's that?" Then, James went door with his black costume and wing at the back and started to threw metal ball at the killer face. And all of them had died ecxept one the one that's alive lighted a bom at the building. As soon as it pop all the people started screaming just them. James just blew the fire and all turn to ice. 

And the guy who's still alive are still running heading to the beach and James push him and he fell to the sea forever. and the police says "Sorry for saying you're the killer". 
"It's Ok"
And all people started to scream "You're the superhero"




Written by Faiz Firdaus


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Tulisan di atas adalah tulisan Faiz (8 th) duduk di year 4 (disalin sesuai aslinya). Dia menulisnya hanya kurang lebih 15 menitan saat pulang sekolah. Tidak ada yang nyuruh, tiba-tiba saja "ndlosor" di karpet sambil nulis hehehe...

Mungkin ada beberapa kalimat yang kurang tepat, saya cukup memakluminya. Namanya saja belajar :)

Good job Faiz....




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2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Aku urung mudheng ceritane.... tapi lumayan keren pilihan katanya untuk 4th grade student! Really a good job, Faiz!

Ellys Utami said...

Mungkin maksud Faiz itu, ada orang yang dituduh penjahat padahal sebenarnya dia orang baik.

Dia sendiri bilang, tulisan itu masih banyak salahnya hehehe...

Lha ibunya aja nggak bisa nulis sepanjang itu waktu seumuran dia.. hihihi.. :)

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