Showing posts with label Faiz. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Faiz. Show all posts

Mar 22, 2015

[Faiz Post] Climate Change


A climate change is caused by pollution. When we use the car, the engine makes a gas called CO2.
The CO2 comes out from the exhaust pipe and floats onto the air. Because lots of people use car, lots of CO2 floats onto the air. 

When we leave the TV and lights on, it uses electricity. Electricity comes from power station and that makes lots of CO2. Airplanes make even more CO2 than cars.

There is lots of CO2 in the air, that it's covering us like a big blanket.  The CO2 can make the air too hot. Sometimes the ground gets too dry when there is not enough rain.

Sometimes the hot air makes big storm called cyclones. Cyclones make big waves that smash up coral reef. The sea could get too hot causing the coral reef die. The fish will not have any habitat and will go away.

We could keep the earth wonderful by using bicycle and turn off the TV and light when not used.


Faiz Firdaus
(6 JG)

Dec 12, 2014

[Faiz Post] My Autobiography

In 1997 my first sister was born, my mom and dad were so happy because it was their first child. She has a straight hair, she wasn't that tall. After a while my second sister was born. She was born in 2000. She likes to sing very much but not these days. In 2003 my mom accidently had a baby but she was sadly not alive. My dad carried her and than buried her near my house. 

Later I was born. I didn't have any hair until the age of 2. My first word was 'grandma' cause I thought my mom was my grandma :). Often I went to my grandma's house. I've been to a plane since was a baby.

In 2005 my dad went away to France. He went to the Eiffel tower with his friends. When he went back to Indonesia, he bought us lots of souvenirs and toy. And he bought my mom a silver-gold necklace.

After a while in 2006 we move house. Then I meet neighbour whom turns into my best friend. He is 2 years older than me but he is very kind. He had a little sister at the age of me. We live there for a couple years. Then I had kitten, I kept it until she is old.

In 2008 we went to Malaysia for 1-2 weeks. We went to a mountain and we went to a place like Disneyland but smaller. I went to a spaceship there and I saw an alien. We bought a lot of souvenirs and dolls.

In 2010 I went to Hong Kong with my family. We went there for 5 days. We went to Disneyland. I saw a massive castle with a Mickey Mouse painting in front of it. After that we went to a 4D cinema it was so fun we watched Donald duck. Lots of people in Hong Kong didn't understand English so we had to deal with it. At breakfast I ate noodle and soup at an Indonesian restaurant.

In 2011 we moved house but I often went to my old house. My old house is really close to my new house. After a few months we moved to Egypt. I got confused because it's the reverse driver seat. When I arrived at my house I was just amazed, because it was the best house we've ever had.

My mom likes to take pictures and travels. Then we went to Pyramid, I was shocked of how big it is. When I was small I used to think it was the size of a mall. After a week I went to MBIS, I was in year 3 that time. I didn't have any friends till William came, but he just went to school for a week and then he left forever. But Rei and Vivian came and became my friends.

After I finished year 4 I went back to Indonesia but realized there was going to be a revolution. We were supposed to come back at the 21st of August but my dad's company didn't let us because there was revolution.

But at January my dad's company let us go back to Egypt but my sister didn't want to go back because she got fewer friends in  Egypt but she got more friends in Indonesia. So I, my dad and my mom went back to Egypt. After we arrived in the airport the guy said, "You don't have enough visas." Then he took us to an office and I felt very scared because the office is like prison. But than we just passed it.

Then I came back to MBIS and stayed there until now on. I was in year 5 that time. At April we went to Cyprus and we went to lots of place. We stayed at house located in high ground. I slept at a bunk bed.

In year 6, I wore a tie and it was not nice :). On September my mom and dad left me to Hajj. I stayed with my dad's friends for 3 weeks. They were supposed to come at 18th of October but they delayed it  to the 19th of October. It was kind of hard to control myself without my mom and dad. When they came back, they bought me a watch and I was very happy :)



Faiz Ahmad Firdaus
(Year 6 JG MBIS)



With my sisters

With my neighbour and best friends in Indonesia
With my best friends in MBIS




Sep 4, 2014

Faiz Post : Wonderful Egypt

Egypt is very good to new comers, even though it often has lots of power cut, etc. Egypt has a lots of ancient stuff, sports club, shopping malls and stuff you might like.

Egypt has beautiful beaches and seas. The Read Sea is a perfect place for diving. The North Coast is a great place for photographs and swimming.

The shopping malls in Egypt is very awesome especially the one at new Cairo, named Cairo Festival. Every shop at Cairo Festival it almost the same in Europe. And there is still other shopping malls that you might like.

Egypt is known as home of the Pyramids. However there are still more ancient buildings but the Giza Pyramids is the most famous building in Egypt.

Egypt has many restaurant, not only Egyptians food. There are lots of international foods too, like French food, Lebanese food and others.

The school in Egypt is fantastic. Even though there are many Arabic/Egyptians school but it is still good. The International school in Egypt is great, cause they teach you brilliant stuff and languages.

Egypt has lots of golf course and golf for local tourism. People in Egypt mostly like golf. That's why they have lots of golf courses.

Nile is known of the widest river on earth. And there was a special boat called Christina and Felucca.
In Egypt, there are lots of sports club and courses for many sports you want to try. Wadi Degla is a very big sports club in Egypt.

Egypt has lots of shows, mostly everywhere. For example dancinf, playing music, etc. Egyptians people mostly like dancing than others.

In Egypt they have an old market named Khan el Khalili. It's basically a place for shopping old stuff or smoking shisha.

Pharaonic village is a location at downtown where you could see what the ancient people do and how they work.

Egypt has lots of community centres so tourist don't get confuse easily. For example, BCA, CSA, ACE, etc.

The sun very hot in Egypt so it's good for people who normally live in cold places. Because if they come to Egypt they can just relax the sun.




Khan Khalili Market

Red Sea


May 26, 2014

Faiz Post : Daydream



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I went to France
Because I got a chance

I wake up at nine
It's a time fine

I would like some bread
With jam I spreaded

I would use my best shirt
That doesn't get any dirt

I'd like to go to the park
Where the dog bark

The day was sunny
Sweat as honey

I'd like to go to Spain
When it rain

I like to play
In the day

My meal would be popcorn
I like it since I was born  :D


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Written by
Faiz Firdaus (9)





May 8, 2014

Faiz Post: Avakas Gorge, Cyprus



At 28th April we went to Avakas Gorge in Cyprus. We walked about 1 km to the Gorge. We were very tired. After that we arrived at the Gorge. But before we went in, Mario asked us very weird question he said, "Why did someone plant a grapefruit in the middle of nowhere?"

Then my friend answered, "Because it's near the stream!" 

We went into the bushes, then we saw this big stone. Mario told us that the powder is use to heal broken arm or leg.

As soon we walked deeper into gorge. We saw stream beside us. After that, we were crossing the stream happily and some got wet. But then we lost Mario and other children. We were still crossing the stream but the were already up.

So Mario come down and told us where to go. Then we saw lots of caves full of fruit bats. Later, we saw a small slugs. Mario told us that they like fresh water. Then we went all the way back which was trying. After that, we arrived at this tap and he said, "It's for drinking." So we have to wait until it's your turn.

Then we went to a path and I did'nt know that it's a shortcut to get the bus, than we all sat down at the bus and relax. :)


Written by Faiz Firdaus (9 years)


They are my roomates, (Nikolas, Nhyiraba, Jason, me and Rei)


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Sep 13, 2013

[Faiz Post] My Lost Friend

In a dark stormy night me and my friend were in a deep dark forest, looking for a treasure map. Suddenly our torch went off we were panic because we forgot the way back and we can't really see.

Later we saw an old box with a five torch around it. Then, we went across the pile of five torch but I felt a little chill. Cause when I turn around, a lots of bats were flapping their wings rapidly. But my friend just quickly took the box and we both ran away.

After that, we saw a house made out of wood. Then we went inside the house. The house were quite dark, 2 minutes later we open the box and it was the treasury map, diamonds and golds. Then we fall asleep.

After I wake up my friend was gone! and three pieces of paper were on the floor and it says,


"Faiz, could you please help me. I am at the jail, the witch have taken me last night. Look at the map and you'll see where the jail is, and i'm worried"
"Oh, I must help him! " I said to myself with a shock face.

Later on, I was making a sharp stick from the branches to protect myself. I rolled the treasure map and put it to my pocket. Later on I arrived at "The Land of the Demons" lots of wolf (wolves) were coming nearby. So, I fight them with my stick and each of them died with a blood everywhere.

After that, I went inside fortress of doom. No one was inside but suddenly a witch went pass me. I was coming after her and I was hungry and my stomach started making noise. The witch heard it, the witch said,"Who is there?"Loudy as she turned back and she said,
"It's okay. I won't hurt  you."
And I show up myself, she said,
"Who are you, what are you doing here?"
"I'm looking for my friend, he's stuck in the jail," I replied.

To be continued...

Written by Faiz (8Y)
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May 20, 2013

Faiz Post : Monty Mouse



Source : http://www.writingsinrhyme.com/index.php/the-silent-diner/


Hi I am Monty. I am 5 years old. I live in a hole at grandma's house. I feel so comfortable because she always gives me a cheese and that's why I like this place.

I feel scared because grandma had brought a new cat. And the cat is always going to chase me. And grandma will not take care of me anymore. She will take care of the cat. The cat look scary because  whenever he looked at me he purred. But grandma was just relaxing watching TV.

When I went out of my hole to get some cheese from the refrigerator. I saw the cat walking and looking at my hole, but then I went to the the refrigerator and close the door and hide with a cheese around me. 

After that, I went out of the refrigerator. I felt full just then the cat saw me and he chased me along the corridor and he put his hands on top of me. But he missed by 1 inches, I ran back into my hole.

I had a plan. My plan was  to make a trap for the cat. First, I need a wire, second I need a string, third I need a meat. When I finished making it I put it near the cat cage at night.

In the morning, grandma was out for shopping. I looked at the trap that I made, but the cat was still sleeping. So, I waited him until his awake. After he woke up he went into my trap and he got stuck. I was laughing the whole time but he was angry.

After that I felt sorry. So, I just opened the trap and let him go. Now I felt sorry too because he kept chasing me. And now we live in peace. 2 weeks after that, grandma always take care both of us.


Written by Faiz Firdaus (8 years)


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Teacher comment :
What a happy ending, your plan was very succesful!
Your use of past tense is improving, keep following on this.

Tulisan sebelumnya I am Not Killer but a Superhero

Apr 29, 2013

Faiz Post : I am Not Killer but a Superhero



In a dark creepy night there was a man named JAMES. He was a farmer, but people say his a killer because people saw a picture of him killing a granny in a forest.






But a midnight he went out to the "zombie street" and give people a notes that says "I am no a killer". After he finished doing that, he ran as fast as he could to his house. His House was fall of spider webs.

In the morning, people were reading the notes and try to figured how he look like. And than people were saying to the police like this "Could you please find him and the police said," OK."And 500 police were looking for him.

And there came a man with a scary face with a gun on his pocket. And a sound of a gun shot came and say, "James is not the killer but I am, he started to kill one by one of a person."

After that James went up to the sky and people started to say,"Who's that?" Then, James went door with his black costume and wing at the back and started to threw metal ball at the killer face. And all of them had died ecxept one the one that's alive lighted a bom at the building. As soon as it pop all the people started screaming just them. James just blew the fire and all turn to ice. 

And the guy who's still alive are still running heading to the beach and James push him and he fell to the sea forever. and the police says "Sorry for saying you're the killer". 
"It's Ok"
And all people started to scream "You're the superhero"




Written by Faiz Firdaus


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Tulisan di atas adalah tulisan Faiz (8 th) duduk di year 4 (disalin sesuai aslinya). Dia menulisnya hanya kurang lebih 15 menitan saat pulang sekolah. Tidak ada yang nyuruh, tiba-tiba saja "ndlosor" di karpet sambil nulis hehehe...

Mungkin ada beberapa kalimat yang kurang tepat, saya cukup memakluminya. Namanya saja belajar :)

Good job Faiz....




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